more than words

[fufaraw]

[PART 1: Ch 1-4 ] [ PART 2: Ch 5-8 ] [ PART 3: Ch 9-12 ] [ PART 4: Ch 13-15 ] [ PART 5: Ch 16-18 ] [ PART 6: Ch 19-21 ] [ PART 7: Ch 22-24 ] [ PART 8: Ch 25-Epilogue ] [ ART ]  DOWNLOADS all dowloads includes art PRC (mobi) for Kindle and Palm OS Epub for Sony and iPad PDF incl. pagenumbers/footer PDF w/o pagenumbers/footer MORE THAN WORDS Fic title: More Than Words Author name: fufaraw Artist name: bflyw Genre: RPS AU Pairing: J2 Rating: NC-17 Word count: 59,530 Warnings: dubcon, mpreg, suicide ideation, minor character death offscreen Scientists and statisticians have monitored falling birth rates for decades, helpless as declining fertility predicted possible human extinction. But a new ray of hope was discovered; boys are tested in their twelfth year, and the small percentage who are capable of conceiving are taken, separated for education and training in their new way of life. At eighteen, each is assigned to the man who will father the children he will bear. Jensen missed his testing; his status is discovered when he's an adult. Unprepared, untrained, and unwilling, he's assigned to Jared. Jared is conflicted by his desire to father children, his growing love for the man placed in his care, and sympathy for Jensen's difficulty adjusting to the changes in his life. Resentful and rebellious, Jensen finds unexpected strength and support from the man he should hate. NOTE: With the loss of Megaupload, temporary hosting of PDFs, etc. has been graciously provided by morgandawn. She asks me to extend the hosting offer to other 2011 BigBang authors and artists whose work was hosted at Megaupload. Contact me at my profile address or by PM.   | Link to fic | | Link to art |

Comments

[gwendolynd.livejournal.com]

This was an amazing fic. I was impressed at the span of time it covered and how well it was done. My heart broke that Jensen just wouldn't deal with the children or cared about the pregnancy as a whole--but it was so well done.

Love the characterization in this! The only thing that threw me, was when it stated J2's ages as forty something...but said the oldest son was only 5? Unless I read it wrong. But that seemed incredibly weird. If it all started when Jensen was 24, then by the time he got around to meeting the kids...JJ would be like...graduating. Watch your POV's in sections, they tended to flip back and forth a little, but like I said, the story was amazing and the emotion could be felt through it. <3<3<3

Great job honey!!

[fufaraw]

Thank you for saying such nice things!

I do need to find where you got the impression the Js were in their forties, and fix that. Um, no. The story spans a little less than seven years from the time Jensen arrives at Jared's house until the final scene, so Jensen is thirty, thirty-one, Jared is thirty-three or so, by the end. I never actually gave Jared's age, but I always thought of him as not more than two or three years older than Jensen. I can't think where I gave the impression they were in their forties. Now you've got me worried.

[gwendolynd.livejournal.com]

Oh! I just went back in my PDF file, and don't you worry! It was all my misreading. I read the "An apparently healthy forty-seven year old man had suffered..." line and it got mixed in my head. I was exhausted and it was like 130AM by the time I was reading the end, so that was completely my mix up. Haha. *facepalm*

[fufaraw]

Oh, whew! No worries then. Thanks for telling me, 'cause I was set to scour the whole thing for that!

Aside from that, *g* I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for telling me so.

(Also? Nice icon. *g*)

[gwendolynd.livejournal.com]

lol I loved that one. ^_^ *claps*